Black Poetry : Stories

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jdj530, Nov 23, 2003.

  1. jdj530

    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    Why you gotta tell stories, I know where you been...So why you gotta tell stories it's cause you all mixed up in how you like to change the subject in what we be talkin about cause I can tell when you lie...cause you like to tell stories.
     
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    nice when u can notice the lies of one
    to not be played ...nice
     
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    indeed when u can tell its a lie..
    like a betray..real nice
     
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    Thanx im glad yall enjoyed my comments about lies cause u cant tell a lie to someone that can tell if ur lying cause they'll always end up changing the subject if ur talking about something related to wat they've been doin so thank you again....
     
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    so true indeed
    you can see
    and feel
    when it is
    a story
    nice drop
    Peace
     
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    feeln dis 2 da fullest
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    Thank you everyone I experience things then I write about them and add a little something to it....
     
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    You ain't never lied!!!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh yeah wassup gurlllll!!! how ya been u need to come around these parts more often! i like this one,
    much love :heart:
    -story
     
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    Thank You all for replying to my poem, especially the ones that liked it...



    Thank You :look:
     
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