Black Poetry : Stop You're Breaking My Heart!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop you're breaking my heart!
    I told you before we start.
    Don't come promising me flowers
    and love.
    What the hell were you thinking
    of?
    You knew you had to much baggage
    on your back.
    You knew you needed some love
    and comfort someone to take up
    the slack, and you claimed
    you just needed me!
    Blew me away with your distance
    and shutdown procedure...
    And your way of holding yourself
    away from me...
    When you should have been leaning
    into me!
    Stop you're breaking my heart!

    Stop you're breaking my heart!
    I been hurt so much in the past.
    Do you know I wanted this to last.
    I waited patiently for you.
    Had faith in what you said and
    what you do.
    Then you pulled the rug out from
    under me.
    Said you were not ready for a
    relationship.
    The day after Valentine's day...
    **** what a way
    to say...

    Stop,
    You're breaking my heart.
    I don't want to be your
    bosom buddy right now.
    I don't even know what
    you were thinking...
    I got my nose scrunched
    up cause there is something
    stinking.
    The way you want to chat
    online and come visit like
    nothing has happened or
    changed...
    Man, are you deranged?

    Stop You're breaking my
    heart.
    Said you don't want us
    to be enemies...Please!
    I don't hate you...
    in fact I still love you
    and that's what makes
    it so bad...you said I
    was the best you ever
    had!
    Am I happy , am I sad
    sho ain't glad...
    You want to be my friend?
    You must know that will
    come to an end!
    Love you to much to
    pretend...

    Stop!
    You're breaking my heart!
    I can't do this again, going
    from lover to friend.
    Making me think there is
    something unworthy
    within me... some reason
    you don't want to be with
    me!
    Stop!
    You're breaking my heart!
    I just want to make a fresh
    start...again!
    humph...yo friend!
    BJS(C)2003

    :confused: :confused: :confused: :(
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya here.
    Some relationships easily flow from lover to friend, but those who hurt ya.... now that doesn't flow so well.
    great peace.
    Hope he realises what he's lost.

    *Emma*
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard that. You know they say they want to be your friend or "just kick it" so they can still have a foot in tha door and get some. hehe. Very nice write Mslb. Always tight!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa! i heard dat
     
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    msluciousb,

    The subject's emotions came through crystal clear in this piece.

    >>Then you pulled the rug out from
    under me.
    Said you were not ready for a
    relationship.
    The day after Valentine's day.<<

    There are no words.

    Totalview
     
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