Black Poetry : STOP WRITING ME LETTERS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 27, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    It seems when we were 2gether you had nothin 2 say..
    Now you 23 lock'd down I get a note everyday..

    HA..

    When you was free .. you didn't want to be with me..
    You went from straight player.. now I'm wifey..

    HA ..

    I must got boo boo written on my face..
    What you can do is man up... take a true Black Man's place!

    HA..

    You know me better.. won't kick while you down..
    I'll throw some dollas in ya account... how does that sound...

    HA..

    Ya, Imma hold you down til the end... don't get mad cause I can
    I tried to be the woman of the house .. you made me the man...

    HA..

    Never wanted to wear the pants.. I look pretty in a dress..
    I'm sugar and spice.. but can be bitter and sweet if you wan tess...

    HA..

    You say this life.. this life is forever...
    Well you gon cash them checks... and we gon rise together........

    But for now, I gotta go to work to pay these bills.. so please, stop writing me letters!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He has much to say now, cause you're probably one of the few who cares to lsiten. Many have had to be that rock, the foundation that keeps the house standing. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    Great flow
    You know the truth is in your words
    Having no desire to participate
    Contribute to the growth of what you both made your fate

    23 lockdown, now where are his friends
    Writing you constantly
    He will go back to his bad ways
    As soon as he is free again
    Cut the cord
    Have no more burden or noise
    He may never man up

    Sometimes it is the time
    To kick when they are down
    You have their attention
    Smack into
    Their mention
    The truth

    :SuN003:
    Here is a photo
    Maybe he has a need
    To keep in touch
    Save his sanity
    It is not on you
    He has to be responsible for his own actions and change
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Has it not been proven all through history that we are the only light at the end of their tunnel? ...It's a everlasting light.
    Great piece poet.
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady, you put the smack down on the situation...lol!
     
  6. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    much love to all of you... ya'll are the bomb!

    I left before he went down...
    simply cause he was trickin round town...

    made two seeds with a rat i don't need....
    he love only himself is what i beleive...

    but when the going get tough.. who do he call
    the one that he tried make fall...

    he got me ****** up... sisters' is dyin of aids
    he got me ****** up... nasty preparing my grave
    he got me ****** up... he got no self respect
    he got me ****** up... pain is something i just don't forget

    he say i'm crazy... well he got his part in that
    he say i'm crazy....cause i won't take him back
    he say i'm crazy....but he sell his momma drugs
    he say i'm crazy....cause i'll never go back to what was

    crazy defined line by line......
    is something that i think bout all the time...

    to be crazy .. is continue the same behavior and expect a different result...

    so he's the one who's crazy... I was sane enough to give his *** up!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !
    sometime the truth can be a blast
    now that he's on his ...............!@
    who do he call from them walls
    the same queen he had mall
    now the letters roll in
    tell u of his love deep within
    but still his mind is of sin
    this thing is like a never never win
    i feel ya but sometime one can change to better themselves
    and be what they should have been all along so the cares go on !
     
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    wow tight flow. I hear where you coming from sis. Do your thing Handle your handle.

    Flow on
     
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    Loved the Flow

    You held me down in this place, didn't spit in my face so I'll give you that space

    "Ha"

    Make moves in this belly, power equal wit my celly, keep my mind off the Tele

    "Ha"

    Stack books, smoke trees, build a cypher wit my G's 360 degrees

    "Ha"

    Stay away from the drama, meditate Dali Lama, Fruits veggies and a comma

    "Ha"

    Get my word game on , make my verbs ring strong, let my Geb bring *Aung*

    "Ha"

    Make it back to my land, and I'm back to your door but is a Real black man what you really asked for?
    :tongue:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sound like he

    trying to cop 2 pleas

    lol

    shut it down

    shut it down

    tell LADY

    don't act like i'm all important now
     
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