Black Poetry : Stop Licking My Emotions

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop licking my e m o t i o n s
    with the
    lateral walls
    of your aperature
    as I lay interposed
    between delusional memories
    of today and tomorrow ....
    My soul has been
    sucked one to many
    times ... and
    the intensity of
    your intoxicating
    libations have
    poured strategically
    over my body
    claiming me -- lost,
    a functional drunk,
    ... or even an
    incapacitated fool
    ~ ~I am that someone who
    has been tongued into
    a hopeless mental groove
    ...don't catch me...
    -- I am falling UP
    with my eyes closed --
    having hallucinations
    of diving into a pool
    of sky blue heaven ...
    Sinuous rapid movements
    converging amongst an
    undUlating tide
    ~ now
    -- I am swimming towards
    still waters to find happiness
    and a stable
    peace ~ of ~ mind

    ~~ Stop licking my e m o t i o n s




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!

    HELLAVA WAY U LAID DEM WORDS OUT!
    BUT
    IF I STOP LICKIN'
    WHO'S GONNA DO IT!...........LOL
    I LOVE HOW U PUT THIS IN VIBE:heart: :kiss:
     
  3. Tyrone

    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    I felt this, sis. Dayyyuuuummm!

    ummmmm


    Ty
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    go on wit yo' bad self! well...dang, I've said just about everything I could possibly say about your skills...but comps never get old so...."per usual" this is a tightly written piece let's name it "10"

    blak
    verb
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    do i have to?

    N2
    you like the first of the month
    you always come through

    defintely loving your art work
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2

    This was lip smackin good!!!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Sugah ~ you already know I don't mind
    you lickin' my mental ... :wink:
    (just be gentle!) :lol:


    Much :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyrone~

    All I can do is smile ... :D Or to say the least, what makes me feel best is when I know one of my flows can be felt by any reader ... I'm so glad this piece moved you!


    One.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Well....well...well, comin' from the KING of Scribes -- it means a great deal to know that you continue to enjoy reading pieces of ME.



    One.
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    I wanna be the 1st & the Last of every month for you Boo ~ don't cheat me -- treat me!

    Much :heart: & respect

    Thanks for feeling my flows!

    One.
     
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