Black Poetry : Stop da **** lyin'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Nov 9, 2004.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop lyin to me
    Tellin' me to be all that I can be
    Take a trip with the army
    Tellin' me that will get free education for me
    Then lie to me
    Once I take the trip tellin' me that I have to go to Iraq to fight for the country of me
    **** my country!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    What has my country ever did for me
    But give 17 years of hardache for my family
    Put us in the projects in rat infested slum and constant poverty
    Can't get a job cause that will take welfare from me
    Just one penny over the limit and they will take it instantly
    Got to wake up to gunshots and helicopters above me
    Got to walk the block quickly
    Cause if you walk slowly
    That could prove quite deadly
    Got the people the tax payers pay scared to come in the hood around me
    Just cause they think we don't pay taxes like the neighborhoods around me
    We need help too......and you expect me to fight for that country!!!????


    The same country that don't won't to accept me into their hoods
    Look at me crazy when I walk in the store for food
    That look at me as no good
    Misunderstood
    Pah-lease!!!!!!!!! I wish I would
    Shoot a bullet and die for this country who is rude
    and up to no good
    Do you really expect me to put my life on the line for you??????

    You'll never see you stepping in mashes and **** for the person that killed my cousin
    Gave children crack for no reason
    That molested and killed kids, this ain't no fiction
    No, you'll never see me screaming for my country in high diction
    Or holding heavy bullets for planes wishing
    To come back home to my family off a mission
    Cause I'll already be here, chillin'

    Cause this country ain't did **** for me
    But put me in poverty
    While they laugh at me with their riches........I ain't never had over fifty
    Tellin' me, baby you can be anything you aspire to be
    Except wealthy
    They will give me a job as a garbage woman before I will ever become wealthy
    Accept me to the college but put me out the first time I make a D
    Talkin' bout you a smart lady
    But we could really
    Use you in the army
    or navy
    ***** pah-leeze, NOT ME!!!!!
    You can't fool me
    Stop lyin' to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    You tell every
    lady
    That's willing to listen that you could use her
    Tellin' her that you'll pay for her college
    And put money in her pocket
    But what you don't tell her is that the money is only an incentive
    And that she won't be able to use it for long until you tranfer
    Her
    Over to a far away land over there
    Sure she won't be shooting bullets and packing missiles, or so you say
    But day after the day
    The reason for being there will come astray
    But hey
    For that dumb broad that you suckered into it they picked their own fate
    Cause I'll neva go fight for you
    Cause the U.S of A ain't neva fought for me!!!!!!!!

    I still lay awake at night crying sometimes
    From the life the U.S of A gave me
    And I wine
    All the time
    Wondering why I'm always in the back of the line
    Why am I always behind
    So, since I'm always behind
    I guess, I'll be the last one to go to a registry line too cause the pain with the lies combined
    Have finally brokened I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    STOP DA [email protected] LYIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    telling it like it tis here and u better know dat too !
    realms flowing on da lying bed off da tongue
    tyte drop i feel ya
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!!!!!!
    yu always come wit the strong heavy hitters
    lovin it
    i felt this one real hard
    ifd only others would realize
    wats goign on outside our own lives..... ****
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow poet, you hit the bullseye like a trillion times with this one, I guess your pen was on ricochet mode or something. Flowing with truth, they don't care about us unless we can do something for the greater good of them. Whew...you just do your thang girl!!!!!
     
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    Just tell the dang thing, sweetie. This is unbelievable.
     
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    they lie like a mental breakdown i tell ya
     
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    re:Stop

    The service is a health risk now. To join would be suicide.
     
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    I know thats right princessita...If you dont say it you cant depend on them to...
    i love it when you are moved to relay messages of truth
    it is refreshing
    it in reviving
    it is krazelyricks :)
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much family for feeling me. I'm glad to see that I am not the onl one that feels this way. Thank you all for feeling me and havin' the nerve to reply to a sistah. :D
     
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    Its good to know that somebody cares about the REAL truth and can tell it with no shame. Keep bringing the realiness and in return nothing but love. :heart:
     
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