Black Poetry : STOLEN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Mar 4, 2005.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stolen were my midnights
    Where I laid my head
    Upon a pillow of warm flesh.

    Stolen were my winter mornings
    Where hot coffee and the sounds of
    Chirping were our guest.

    Stolen were my children's
    Saturday mornings where
    The sun arosed just for them.

    They would go fishing,
    Play ball...:1on1: :kickball:
    Any fun stuff just to be with him.

    My midnights:heart: , our mornings,
    Were stolen by a friend.
    It was you sistah girl,
    When you stoled my man.:maddd:


    -joyce
     
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    Stolen are the moments that once belonged to us...

    I hear you Joyce, really, I do.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a heartfelt piece...keep flowin

    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When our future appears to be bright, and something comes along to overshadow that, it is painful. It pays to be faithful, even when temptation appears. Flow on poet.
     
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    i could feel this heartfelt indeed....stolen moments of trust wiped away
     
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    beautifully written

    This is so sad, sistah. Much love to you.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll bet she did not think of it that way!! with friends like that?
    well doen poet
     
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    peace,

    something that happens all too often in this thing we call life..............

    nicely done!

    peace
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :dance3: Yall really know how ta make a poet feel warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you.

    ...joyce putting her own shoes back on now.​
     
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    Well joyce, Love can be fickle at times plus unfaithful. Maybe the forever in
    your life hasn't showed up and he was just a pit stop. It happens. Happiness and true love is out there for you. Hang in there. Excellent write.
     
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