Dear Sage,
The intensity of this piece pierced right through me.
Don't get me wrong, I think this piece is beautiful in all it's vulnerability, but I also think it's undescribably sad and...still...still you managed to express this sadness.....
The description of this ailing love, merciless pain and stolen words/stolen passion...it's like I could almost smell the despair.
I could not figure out if this was personal or not, cause you switched from third person to first person, but
believe me...not even Love can steal your poetry..........and....... Love would never do such a thing!
moham
The intensity of this piece pierced right through me.
Don't get me wrong, I think this piece is beautiful in all it's vulnerability, but I also think it's undescribably sad and...still...still you managed to express this sadness.....
The description of this ailing love, merciless pain and stolen words/stolen passion...it's like I could almost smell the despair.
I could not figure out if this was personal or not, cause you switched from third person to first person, but
believe me...not even Love can steal your poetry..........and....... Love would never do such a thing!
moham