Black Poetry : .::Stolen Words::.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Apr 14, 2005.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unadulterated truth is bittersweet, were it not for the Sage.

    AngelicSage,

    Your work is a class all it's own. :hearts4:
     
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    Shesssssssssss bAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK.....

    The Queen of da PEN is back on da prowl indeed!

    Let the proud be humbled

    Let the bold be silenced

    Let the ignorant be EDUCATED!!!!!

    :terrific: MY SOUL SISTA IS BACK!!!!! :terrific:

    Okay first things first...I SHO do LOVE dat avatar sister that is ELEGANTLY SO sage :smokin: My sista got taste like what!

    :D secondly...

    This peace my sister....*sigh* *Deep breaths* this peace is SO real RAW and VIVID my mind shutters at its overwhelming grasp.

    You my sister are inspirations life essence...and it sho feels good to feel your poetic prowess once again :) :read: :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writers block can come upon one for many reasons, but a pain like this knows only one kind of season. It's an ache not quite like anything else, and you've captured it so well. Penetrating flow.
     
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    I could longer write…of such
    My passion had been suffocated…
    The night before / found
    with a plastic bag over her head
    A Soul Massacre at Heartbreak Hotel
    {Homicide}
    Although…I was spared
    my hands were tied behind my back
    with fingers mutilated…one by one
    There was an ol’ dirty rag of regret
    Stuffed forcefully, in my mouth
    Pain f^cked me, mercilessly…in broad daylight
    Unashamed of the crime it committed
    Raping me…repeatedly
    It licked my black tears, as if it cared



    got [email protected] gurl...u f'd up my mental with that...
    writers block my black @ss...













    *wishin i had writers block like this*

    one love
    khasm
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Sage,
    The intensity of this piece pierced right through me.
    Don't get me wrong, I think this piece is beautiful in all it's vulnerability, but I also think it's undescribably sad and...still...still you managed to express this sadness.....
    The description of this ailing love, merciless pain and stolen words/stolen passion...it's like I could almost smell the despair.
    I could not figure out if this was personal or not, cause you switched from third person to first person, but
    believe me...not even Love can steal your poetry..........and....... Love would never do such a thing!

    :heart: moham
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    this was awesome just blew me way
    had my mental running
    u go sista SAGE............................
     
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    Oh my, my, my, my. Sweet sister friend, I've been missin your work so much. I wondered where you'd gone. And then you come back and drop this masterpiece on us. My lawd!!!!!

    "duality slices the air"
    Girl, this piece grabs a reader by the collar and pulls her up close. Takes her into the scene. It's definitely sad, but the passion and the pain from contradictions stands out to me the most.

    Lost love can kill ya. You sure know how to write about it, my kindred spirit. Much love to you...............and please drop us some mo! I been too hungry. :coffee:
     
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    The intensity of the opening lines alone still has me in awe. Everytime I visit this site, I make a point to look for your writing. The skill and emotion always come through with equal force and for some odd coincidence you're always seeming to write my current situation, not only accurately but beautifully.

    Thank you so much for every word that passes through your pen and all the ones to come :D
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    It ain't all that...

    Magnificent Soul was better. :tongue:

    Seriously...naw, seriously...it was. :D

    J/k

    This piece is tight. A director of poetry is she.

    Beautiful piece...presentation magnificent.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us...the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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