Black Short Stories : stolen property

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iight... this is really the first time i'm hittin this forum...
    i usually dont write stories... and to me this is just a long poem...

    this right here is i guess you can call the introduction.... bare wit me...

    stolen property

    dammn
    at first glance
    when i met you
    i wanted nothing but to be within your hold
    as the night got late
    our casual conversation got old
    knowing you threw a friend
    i thought your invitation was purely genuine
    wine and dine for free
    with a handsome gentleemn
    u offered me
    over and over
    repatedly
    you treated me
    gradually as time passed
    i softley beagn to feel you hands
    as they slid up my thigh
    lying in your bed
    at your house
    thoughts were swirling
    on how to safely deny
    as the touching and kissing continued
    i began to question was i really into you
    knowing that our love had elapsed with time
    i also knew this moment shouldnt be mine
    feelings of loosing my soul
    over came me
    as you forced your self within me
    all i could do was trace back memories
    signs of you doing this to me
    breaking my body in 2
    separating my heart from my soul
    leaving me abused
    inserting urslef in places not welcome
    leaving traces of a places where the devil's from
    got me questioning my actions after ur done
    tryin to figure out who really won
    you might have thought u could steal my soul
    take it, smash it and run
    but never my faith
    or fear to use my gun
    exactly wat i worte
    you read it right
    he shoudnt have tried me that night
    now im sitting here tossing and turning
    wondering if it was all worth it
    struggling to overcome
    because another battle just begun.
     
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    exquisitely done...nothing but raw emotion showing in this drop.
    poetry is such a lovely thing eh?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! deep and smooth
    stolen property this was in da raw
    love the poetic story next part please wow sista !
     
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    thanks greggy and rich.... that made me feel better....more will continue
     
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