Black Short Stories : stolen property I and II

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    stolen property part I

    not guilty
    cuz they never found a body
    stolen property
    mine could never be regained
    but others
    you never kno
    memories of that first night
    replaying in my mind
    memories of those immense thoughts
    i had of him being mine
    and when that time came
    i wasnt ready to change
    giving him something of myself
    i knew he couldnt value
    everyone asked why did i fight
    and not just give in to that
    handsome
    charming
    intelligent
    had everything going for himself
    man that night
    i couldnt selttle for less
    when all my life
    i carried my self above all the rest
    i knew this wasnt for me
    so instead of giving in
    sucumbing to him
    enduring another trial of captivity
    i faught
    to be free
    as he stole my soul
    bruising my insides with his distrust
    i screamed
    realizing the devil
    was cumming
    within me

    no longer could i live
    with the fact
    that i hurt
    so i found my gun
    and went buzurk....


    ___________
    part II

    not gulity
    is what they gave me
    because they never found his body....
    as i made him kneel
    he began to plead
    for me to rethink his future
    and these possibilites
    nothing but thoughts of my pain would surface
    as i tried to regain
    strength
    to remember the good times
    our dates
    that dress he bought
    red sink..softly trimmed wit lace
    didnt do a **** thing
    but propell my hate
    due to his decit
    asking him why
    wondering if he knew
    before he died
    makin me endure such pain
    knowing my stolen property will never be regained
    as his lips began to move
    the gun seemed to prove
    to be my best friend
    in the end
    silenceing him
    my problems
    my pain
    not guilty
    is what they found me
    because they found his body
    but if only i knew it wasnt threw
    but if only i knew it wasnt threw
    if only i knew
    i'd awaken to more bad news
    finding his soul was living on within me
    wat would you do.....?
     
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    heavy story leaving to answer
    i like dis here daroc tyte
     
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    thanks rich... more is to come
     
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    bring it on sista bring it pt.3 please !
     
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