Black Short Stories : stolen property...ending

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  1. daroc

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    stolen property .... : $350

    knock knock
    tick tock
    time is banging on my door
    i kno my patience can only take so much more
    waiting for the doctor to return
    telling me whether or not i've been burned
    and how bad are things
    verdict in
    i dont know what to think from his expression
    then next thing i kno
    i hear him say
    twins
    twins...
    twins...
    over and over i constantly start questioning...
    doctor are you sure...
    this cant be...
    why me... i mean im glad its not three..
    but i really cant deal wit any...
    escpecially after what he did to me
    r u sure everything is right...
    now i have to decide if i should take 2 lives....
    time....
    why now in my life...
    time... its time...
    i still kno what i need to do...
    rid myself of all evil...
    even if it does me 2...
    i'm sorry lord but i must sin..
    i cant keep these babies with in....
    doctor... i'm ready....
    to go on with it...
    please hurry while i'm ok with it....
    laying there... still
    legs up thinking about any and evey thing but this
    about my dreams as a lil girl
    to my future in the world
    about what ima do tomro
    im not going to be able to work
    due to all my hurt
    physically
    and internally
    but life goes on....
    and lord please continue to bless me
    cuz..i'm truely sorry....
    _____________________________________

    stolen property: life goes on...

    as sweat pulsates across my face
    i'm crying
    laying here
    trying to shoot away all my fears
    self realization
    has my facing
    facts of what i did
    knowing i could have really kept those kids
    i could have gotten threw
    if i would have only had more faith in you
    lord
    self realizations
    got me thinking
    about all i did was want my hurt to end
    but
    look at me
    it still hasnt
    all i yearned for was a remberance no more
    or any thing to flip my mind
    of those awful moments in time
    and lord
    look at me now
    i dun killed
    not one
    but 2 of my childs
    i'm sorry....
    thinking that if they were gone before they even got started
    everything would be ok
    but not only did i kill them
    i hurt me
    and hurt you
    but yet i kno wit ur strength i will get threw
    i feel so dumb
    and lost
    i'm so broken
    from all this pain
    i'm having hot flashes
    sweating away like im in hell
    and this is my price to pay
    all i wanted was for the hurt to end
    but look at me lord
    im still torn
    thank god i have you as my tru friend....
    someone i can confide in
    cuz without your strength
    i wouldnt make it threw
    so....thank you......

    the end.......
     
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    whewwwwwwww! what a deep emotional heavy story of a woman stolen property
    a very touching story i followed this one from start to finish what a gift u have
    continue to write short stories and when the book come out let me know very
    impressive sista i mean that.
    peace
     
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    thanks rich.. that put a smile to my face....
    didnt kno where it was going from jump..
    but i figured i'd end wit a tribute to god
    i'm glad u like it...
    thanks
     
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    most welcome keep writting from GOD eyes
    your an dear angel of his spead it and get that
    book on the market sista i know u will someday
    soon good luck .....very talented writer
     
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