Black Poetry : Stolen Innocence

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  1. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart is in great pain, a pain with an endless depth...
    See this hurt you gave, won't fade away, or magically disappear
    This pain you gave will forever be here
    In the back of my mind
    Everytime I rewind old times, memories from the past
    There will forever be that fear
    See this pain that viciously tugs at my heart strings wont drain from these veins
    This heartache will never change
    Flowing throughout my blood stream...
    Because of you
    Im nonstop crying,slowly dying,constantly denying that something like this ever happened to me
    Wondering time after time as the day becomes night if I'll ever chance to see another morning light
    Live to have another breath of life
    You see this pain came when you entered my body, my temple
    And robbed me of my innocence, something that can never be given back
    That day you caused me to swallow my pride let you arise even though i fought the good fight
    You recieved your own personal glory
    No pleasures in store for me
    All for you to take advantage of
    You saw me as someone weak & below you..your prey
    So you chose to do the unspeakable of having your body over take mines
    And see this wasn't your 1st time
    You were a professional at this high crime
    This crime some see as murder
    I would of rather commited suicide the letting you rape me...come inside.......
    My gratest fears in the back of my mind had collide with reality
    That day you chose to rape me
    And let the disease in your body to come & infest mines
    Let it slowly suck the life out of my veins
    See that pain........
    ...Forever Remains...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all of dis .....
    soon and very soon
    it will be all ova and
    sweet joy , love & peace
    will come hold on !!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was felt
    as rich say hold on
    iit will fade
    peace
     
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    whoa, this really touches my heart. I am prayin for ya, sweetie and for an end to your pain. it's not your fault. :grouphug:
     
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    truly a sad tale
    posed extremely well...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    This happens too often to too many. Keep praying to God to keep you whole, this person could never steal your soul. Hugs to you.
     
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    :mad: this touches me deep I have known a few people who have been a victum of the crimes commited here and yes it's a sad and unforgiving crime indeed. U did a nice job on here. :bazooka:
     
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    I am speechless my sista...:grouphug:
     
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