Black Poetry : Stinch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jul 8, 2014.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Instincs is what ur made from.
    Follow them
    Follow yourself
    Lessons sunk into ur veins
    Stablized as well as unstable as the enviroment at times.
    Then comes ur choice of rebellion
    While ur instints, added in perfection, lets u come
    Up for the better
    But hows it look so good
    I'm not even trying to do all that
    Cause I saw the other day on TV
    Folks shouting cause death was around the corner
    So know
    Instincts may be to walk away
    But tht dude in the east got shoot dead in his back.
    Current instints become so thrown off
    It's like the environment continiously sucking us up
    For the outcome only a few standing.

    Trying 2 patch up them holes?
    That's wht they say to do when u/ drowning.
    The learning takes place w/in ur actions
    The lessons ultimently takes place w/in ur reaction
    Reactions are already built up inside from
    The actions of others already
    You ain't the first
    Always is a code of command
    Being here enables ur understandings
    Thoroughly as bread need kneading.


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    Taking a chance for yourself!



     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well written ......love the flow
     
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    It becomes easier as we lay ourselves inside the casket!