Black Poetry : Stimulate pt 2

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  1. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    Envision having established meaningful tidings that symbolizes clarity.
    I plan on expanding your mind with my mechanics.
    I want you to bring you to a place where no one has taken you.
    While you listen to my mellow words you will begin to lose yourself.
    My verbalization will turn into stimulation.
    Allow me to get inside your mind as I hold you spellbound.
    I’m retractile when it comes to the cerebrum.
    I will open up your mind and endow it with reason.
    The terminology that I use are balmy.
    Are you lost in yourself?
    Can you withstand my strong mind?
    May I enrich your mind?
    Occupying the corners of your mind and the depths of your soul is a possibility that could have you lose all self control.
    The elevation of my mind can take you to levels of the unknown.
    Getting farther within your mind can be rational.
    What I have to offer the mind is beyond what you can see.
    Continue to close your eyes as you envision my thoughts.
    Can you handle the torents of neurological mysticism?
    I can make you see things that you never thought you could see.
    My words are a rhythmic tone that fills your heart and your soul.
    Can you feel me from the way I speak?
    Does it bring you energy that is beyond your control?
    Come with me to the furthest depths of my mind.
    Are you intrigued?
    Have I awakened your senses?
    My sincerity is real like a jewel.
    I strum a tune that is branded in your mind.
    My thoughts you learn and for my mind you yearn for I have taken your mind to the point of no return.
    Sincerely,
    Yours
    Derick Bryant
    ©Copyright
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful poetic voyage you take us on, enjoyed this flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was awesome and a ride
    flow on brutha
     
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    diggin the ride i went on
    flow on
    tight drop
     
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    hmmmm....this is very nice....i like it....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    thank you

    I appreciate the love.
     
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    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    The love

    Thank you for the love.
     
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