Quiet Poetry Lounge : Stimulate My Mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DeepSista, Nov 7, 2004.

  1. DeepSista

    DeepSista New Member MEMBER

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    The music softly playing in the background
    this is the moment I've waited for
    quivering as you outline my body
    with the wetness of your mind
    mentally moaning in pleasure
    squirming, as your thoughts tickle my spine

    how can this be, no penetration
    yet I feel you in me

    Your essence is intoxicating
    making me yearn to take in all of you
    just the thought of your being
    is making me high
    teasingly, you graze my outer limits
    leaving warmth on my, oh my!

    how can this be, no penetration
    yet I feel you in me

    DeepSista c/o 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh another sweet release lovin it sista whewwww!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister Deep ...
    Welcome to "ourland" ...of togetherness, relax and do your thing. I like the style you came in with...hope to read more of you, and again...welcome home.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How indeed, but yes, it can and does happen. Some feelings are so strong, they are just, there. Loved the way you conveyed this poet. Do flow on.
     
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    love that part...love it...
    wonderful play on words...

    Your name is befitting...becuz
    this piece touches on a deep
    subject...

    How deep can love and passion get...
    without a touch...Touched but untouched

    Feeling this...
    Sage
     
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