Black Poetry : Still

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 11, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve witnessed a thousand sights
    Still
    Your beauty is the only thing I see

    A thousand thoughts have crossed my mind
    Still
    You are all I think of

    A thousand meals have mixed with your taste
    Still
    I swallow you
    Your sweetness fills me

    I’ve taken a thousand showers
    Still
    I cannot wash you from me

    I’ve lived a thousand lifetimes
    Still
    I live only for your love

    BE
     
  2. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a special

    love ~ for a very special Queen.

    Thanks for sharing, BE. She's all in you. Niiiccce!

    mojo
     
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    I'm feeling ya Heartbeat,sweet words,you have a way with words. Keep scribin. Loved your poetry.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets.

    BE
     
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    Let it Be!!! Let it Be!!

    Just let it keep on flowing...I'm truly feeling the love here...I'm definitely feeling the scribe...
     
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    unforgettable love

    This type of love keeps my Heartbeat~ing;)

    Beautiful piece for a deserving Queen
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ra, Afridancer, Shaneak,

    Thank you for the kind words
    BE
     
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    So simple so subtle so sensualistically sensational :)
     
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