Black Poetry : Still

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Jan 11, 2002.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All though we have gone our seperate way
    I still think of you through out my day

    Eventhough we decided it was out our fate
    I still see you as the perfect mate

    None the less I have moved on
    I still know we had the best there could ever be

    As a result we have moved away
    I still feel you near

    I still care
    I still tear
    I still compare
    I still fear
    giving my all again

    but I dont stand still because I have accepted that it's never gonna be again
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still...

    I know what this is like...apparently it wasn't meant to be but you still carry the memories!

    touching peace!:)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and

    still feeling da compassionate bliss
    dis scribe i know as u flow ......tyght:toast:
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice,

    I'm feeling this. I love the way it ends. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and still

    you move on.....you grow...you learn...you live





    One
     
  6. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read.. Still being true is what it is...
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. M

    This was nice! I feel the emotion in this peice...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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