Black Poetry : Still

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soul is burning,
    heart is still yearning.
    eyes r filled with tears,
    forming deep oceans throughout the years.
    fingers still typing,
    nose still wiping.
    mouth still yelling,
    within my house--my dwelling.
    licks r passed,
    vases crashed.
    police approaching,
    physciatrists still coaching.
    gun is raised,
    mind all crazed.
    fires are shot,
    all over stolen rocks.
    blood on the floor,
    watching above me--angels soar.
    vision growing dim,
    all bcuz of him..................:hammer:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    lilcherry76

    No, baby...don't do it. He isn't worth it. We, here at Destee.com...da Fam...would miss you so. :cry: Come here and let the Fam give you :grouphug:. :crying:

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you

    :toast:
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it ain't me,
    just wanted to share a piece. thanks for the reply. much 'preciated......
     
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    lil cherry that was deep! Im kinda glas it ain't you b/c Id hafta give the guy a beat down! ha ha Thanks for sharing this though
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank YOU 4 sharing,
    hope 2 hear from u all in August...................thank u again.
    lol Swt......thanks
     
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    That was so poetic but even more true and yes we're glad it isn't you. This piece was real.
     
  7. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for your reply angelicsage your reply is greatly appreciated..........thank u once again...........
     
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