Quiet Poetry Lounge : STILL WAITING

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  1. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOKING AT YOU ACROSS THE ROOM LETTING OUR EYES SPEAK

    SIT THERE TALKING CHILLIN BOTH OF US ACTING MEEK

    HIDING OUR FEELINGS HALF WAY CAUSE OF FEAR OF LOSING A FRIEND

    WALK PAST EACH OTHER LIKE IT’S NOTHING WHY DO WE PRETEND

    FEELINGS IN THE DARK AND WERE NOT READY TO BRING THEM TO LIGHT

    WORTH FIGHTING FOR I’M THE ONE THAT CAN TREAT YOU RIGHT

    SO I’LL WAIT FOR THIS ANGEL TO BLESS MY LIFE WITH HER LOVE, PAIN, JOY, AND TEARS

    BE THE ONE RIGHT BEHIND YOU WHEN YOU HAVE TO FACE YOUR FEARS

    THIS AIN’T A SHORT TERM PLAN BUT A LONG TERM GOAL

    WITH YOU AS MY OTHER HALF WE CAN MAKE BEAUTIFUL WHOLE

    SO I STAND AT THIS WALL PATIENTLY WAITING DEBATING IF I SHOULD DO IT MY OWN OR WAIT ON FATE

    ASKING MYSELF IF I’M READY NOW OR WOULD A GIRLFRIEND BE TO MUCH ON MY PLATE

    BUT YOUR MORE THEN A GIRL MORE THEN A WOMAN JUST PLAIN MORE TO ME

    LOOK AT YOU AND CAN’T HELP BUT FEEL THAT YOU AND ME ARE DESITINY
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the looks you two shoot across the room could make July 4th look like a cigarette. feelings of silence give consent, but what is the consent to--to do what you both feel or to wait upon the other, i won't say follow your heart but i will say this, if two halves make a beautiful whole, then why would you LET time keep you wondering, will you LET time have that much control?...beautiful words black_soul and a screen name also...PeAcE
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i don't let time get in my way in more cause now i'm with her and in love with her and plan on marring her.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warmth of embracing thy loveth is beautiful keep her near and alwayz in comfort
    tyte scribe
     
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    That was quite beautiful. You expressed that feeling of somehow knowing, so well.
     
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    your poem was very enjoyable...thanks for sharing

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww,
    this is so beautiful
    I love this
     
  8. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope she hears you talking
    cause i have a feelings she does not eant to miss your thoughts

    plus the way you express them

    Peace
    Patrice

    keep writing cause i trying to see where you gonna take this
     
  9. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS POEM IS SOMETHING THATS SO CLOSE TO MY HEART THAT SHOWS UP ON X-RAY.

    SO:
    PatriceCQueen
    Sweet baby_face
    MzBlkAngel
    watzinaname
    $$RICH$$
    lilcherry76
    I THANK YOU AND MY HEART THANKS YOU FOR THE LOVE SHOWN.
     
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    This is so sweet...
    Very beauitful poem...
    Can't wait to read more from you
     
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