Black Poetry : Still passion for:"HER"

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Titled:"HER"
    "HER"

    The smell, touch, and feel of her causes me to LONG and CRAVE, and although non-reluctantly brilliantly, I become HER slave.


    The thinking of thoughts while having thoughts of thinking, made me forget to remember the things about HER that are unforgettable....HER silhouette and that THING she does to me that makes me oh so MENTALLY wet!!

    Presently present in my forward frontal lobe are IMAGES of her BURNED and ETCHED as if caught in a forest fire and that bear says to me, "ONLY YOU", can prevent the heat of this desire.

    Silly and unrequited, but nonetheless excited, by the emotions thought DEAD and hidden away...I turn and say to HER...POUR out on ME all those sweet things YOU possess and become my stormy rainy day!!

    Incredible and FORMIDIBLE are the exsisting, non exsisting remnants of a dynasty built FOR and by HER through acts of kindness and passion.

    One constant thought remains DEEPLY embedded in my mind, heart, body, and soul....There shall NEVER be another unintentional intentional SOUL kiss as the one administered by....

    HER.
    (Dedicated from ORACLE to SAGE)


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    Quinessential1
     
  2. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH!!!!!!! this piece is so amazing...to be honest with u...i've felt these chain of thoughts and although the way u write so reminds me of those thoughts i had in a moment of insanity, well, they just make sense to me.

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe u pose a great heart within let it be heard
     
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    slave to the vibrations of love.......:love:
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Dayum!
    I am soul feelin' this peace.

    Great work!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  6. angelicsage

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    WOW! (once again!)...........The deep flow of passion and love....never gets old and you can never get enough!

    This is truly a masterpiece written by the hands of a true poet!

    Thank you for blessing us with this refreshing piece of poetic beauty!

    :spinstar:Oh! and by the way..................Merci pour la dédicace!

    I will never tire of hearing, reading.........even knowing.......
     
  7. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: Let me read this one again...

    I campletely, completly agree with mkhaya'lo... The whole insanity thing makes sense.

    I'm soooo lovin this piece!
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dénouement of depth…defined
    In one word… “Quinessential”

    …placing “Her favorite song”…on repeat :wink:
     
  9. Justerika

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    this is that kind of Universal Love that everyone searches for but very few ever find - hold on to it, it is as close to heaven as one can get
    Love superbly expressed in this peace :fairy:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :look: :) WOW :) what else can I say lol WOW :jawdrop:
     
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