Black Poetry : Still Looking for Phyllis

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All Phyllis needed was a friend who was a man
    A loving man
    Her loverman

    Tall like her
    Eye to eye
    Tear to tear
    A man to keep her demons at bay
    Just someone to love her
    Live the passions of her songs
    Take away the pressure

    Had I only met her before the end
    I would have loved to love her
    So I did

    In elementary script and keyboard magic
    I loved her with all I am
    It was all about her
    She started my ink boiling
    It overflowed with each song I'd hear

    Daily tributes to a woman in need
    Happy with myself
    For giving of myself
    It's the only way to be
    Phyllis understood
    I know she loved me

    Somewhere out there Phyllis sings
    She turns constantly
    Hoping her words find me in the heated wind
    She knows I still look for her
    Still wanting to love her
    I'll always look for Phyllis
    Reciever of my written love
    The love I blindly give
    I'm still loking for Phyllis
    Somewhere out there she lives

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is nothing

    elementary about love scribes from the heart. And nothing more beautiful than the honor of being the reason for someone's heartfelt rhyme.

    I'm certain Phyllis hears the muted echoes of her forever loverman.

    Excellent peace, BE

    a
     
  3. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Beat

    you never disappoint. This is real!!

    SWT
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    be, this is a very nicely written piece on ms. hyman. i don't think she realized what a great lady she was, be. i like her music, alot myself. thanks, for sharin' this piece wit us.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    WHAT U DISPLAYED HERE IS MASTERFUL
    MAD SKILLZ BE.........MR. POET:D
     
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