Black Poetry : Still Light

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes,
    Regardless of your Situation...
    You need to take a look
    And realize the times

    Even though you are doing good
    Someone is always doing bad
    Someone needs help
    Someone is falling into the trap

    So when you are busy with yourself
    Letting the world take you by storm
    Center and Know
    Big Things come on small packages

    Be a small package
    and say something nice
    I promise I will start
    Once a Day...at least

    Research the current tragedies
    Don't be obnlivious
    Don't turn your cheek
    For your Mercades...or your Fur

    Stay in the light
    Stay in the life
    Be still life
    Be a Still light

    There are so many blessings in the world...They just need a a path made for them so that they may shine....One thing to be aware of is that it's not up to one person to save the world...but the people to Save lives. Working together could perhaps save The people who are suffering... What happens if The war is not destructed....we Have A HUGE continent supporting the Killing of Darfurian People....Not person...People....Working together saves lives....not a life but Life.
    This is not a vent...I was more....I am only me...but I am not satisfied...As you can see I have the nee to press forward...I know things take time....(Trust me as a freshman in College I know)...I just want to see more....There are peole capable of Aid in that acheivement.
    (I know yall...I can be so Bi-polar....but I am not saying disregard this Message....I just make realizations and CANT let alone try to stay in oblivion for long....smh...It all started with the music)
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Very true, the light is Bright. You are on it Sister!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we must all stay in the Light so true so real i feel you deeply here because if one seem ahead
    on a rise and another fail we all fail when we don't turn to help one up
    eyez must and need to be peer on every brother and sister so we all can move upward
    like the saying say no one should be left behind reach back for that somebody

    keep it real sis ya hittin on gems today..
     
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    ang-EL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are working sista....good insight.
     
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    Sometimes it seems
    No one sees the suffering but you
    I see the suffering
    You’re not alone in the blue

    Many others do see
    We aren’t all in one place
    Not all on the same timing
    Not all on the same page
    Those around you can see
    Keep shining your light
     
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    Life is unpredictable. Never know when we personally will need some help, it's best to be aware of others' plight. Well posed poetess. You're speaking on what's on your mind, the topics are endless, so just let it flow sis.
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    "Be a small package" :)
    I LOVE that line... its creative and catchy and yet still subtle.
    Sista PLATINUMILLITY1 is :hot: :)
     
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