Black Poetry : Still Laying It Down

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still Laying It Down

    False clout get tossed about like pancakes don’t understand
    The fake, overflow microphones and throw stones at domes man
    Potions like oceans waves break over the top even the brave
    Make mistakes and get stopped, in this Hip Hop can I be saved?
    Eat supper correct in the upper deck like sailors I crave
    For the heavy seas want a Chevy on my knees to pray
    That someday it comes, my life is just level today
    Must not worship the devil in no way several say
    It’s evil, having knowledge and yet grabbing garbage
    Is not good practice even for a hot actress been to college
    Lyrically aware and ready to physically share power
    My mind settles but need rhyme medals that’ll shower
    My pride then takes an hour ride in a Nissan Infiniti in a calm
    Vicinity away from the enemy that’s the remedy read my palm
    Rhyme and anoint assign and appoint to Hip Hop positions
    Rip shop in each edition start engines like keys in ignitions
    Politically aware but admittedly don’t care, who dare step on this?
    Need help or get your ankle twist not one wrankle in this bliss
    When my lex get refuel is like a renewal need petro in the Ghetto
    Need revival since my arrival this gang **** could be tribal so let it go

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    "Politically aware but admittedly don’t care"

    that's the way i used to feel
    but if you do nothing
    these devils will shaft you
    and give you a raw deal
    snatch your meal
    for a cheap thrill
    with the signing of a bill....

    tight flo

    peace
    khasm
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm13

    Khasm13 thanks for responding to this and i liked your poem also keep spitting like this
     
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    Madd Props

    I think you should come to the open mic
    and let us hear you :D

    i want to hear this LIVE!!!

    peace

    pd

    : )
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticdelight THANKS FO RRESPONDING TO THIS FOR REAL YO
     
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    Man MADD u know dis was on point !
    brutha u gotta bang dis cross da mic 4 us
    str8 awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    :love: MADDDDDDDDD about MADDDDDDDDD :love:

    I enjoyed this !!! Been a minute since i've been reading and replying ... trying to make up for lost time ... i've been living in our new voice chat room MADDDD ... MADDDD we have our own voice chat !!! You can get on the mic and i can hear you !!! I've been reading some of my stuff and lots of the other Family Members too ... c'mon MADDDD ... c'mon ... c'mon MADDDDDD ... pleaseeeee ... c'mon and let me hear you !!! :)

    www.************

    Enjoyed this much ... fa real

    :heart:

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