Black Poetry : Still in Love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Dec 16, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking about yesterday
    The laughter
    The kisses
    The hugs
    The flirtatious glances
    The places we used to go
    I miss love
    The smile on your face
    I have discovered that I still want you in my life
    What am I going to do?
    Do with myself again?
    I don't know where to go
    Or who to talk to
    I am going to make it right
    Even if we're just friends
    Why did you have to leave?
    Leave me helpless
    I forgot how to move on
    I forgot how to pretend that I am strong
    I forgot how to belong
    I forgot that I have the strength
    That I am brave
    Now I'm just missing you
    Still in love with you...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    storm u need my hand my love to hold
    my warm embrace and to put a smile on
    ya gentle sweet face
    i'll be up here just call
    flow on sis.....
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Desert Storm

    That was nice. I like...I like.:D
     
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    Trust
    you
    aint
    alone
    foreal
     
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    tyte poem.........im feelin it 4 real...........much love :)
     
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    Hotep.....

    I believe in giving love in order to get love. This is my first post and its to your poem. I was in a time where I was missing someone and this is how I felt. This was good work. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep shining and be blessful.
     
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    true ..... sometimes when we are with someone we lose ourselves ... our own identity .... become vulnerable ..... because when you are truly in love there aren't any longer two separate lives being lived but rather two hearts intertwined, becoming as one..... nice poem
     
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    storm, my friend....

    i send sweet tulips from the meadow to you for this scribe for each time i read your voice it sings songs of depth and honesty...

    you always got a spot to rest and find comfort in the meadow lil' sis'....

    one.
     
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    Awww this piece rings with sincere melancholy, wistfulness, and love. This was so touching! I can definitely relate with the poigancy of these emotions. Definitely feeling the love in this flow!
     
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