Black Poetry : Still in love with you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 23, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since the day we met
    Until the day I die
    When the bomb drops and the smoke clears
    In my heart it's you and I
    I I'm tryin to say
    I'm dying here inside
    I miss you more each day
    There's not a night I haven't cried
    I tried to walk away
    But ain't no sense for me to lie
    Life just don't seem the same
    Without you by my side
    So tonight let's make a pact
    Me and you til the sun don't shine!

    What I'm really tryin to say
    I can't make it day to day
    I guess I'm not that strong
    Cause I'm still holding on
    So here's the honest truth...
    I'm still in Love wit chu

    Other playas hatin on you
    But I've got a mind of my own
    No need to shop around,
    I had the good ish at home
    You got locked down
    Look how much love was shown
    Gazing in your eyes through glass
    Somehow making love through the phone
    But you still wanna play games?
    Baby I'm too **** grown
    You had my heart for life
    But yours was only on loan

    I guess I'm trying to say
    I can't make it day to day
    I'm really not that strong
    Cause I'm still holding on
    So here's the honest truth...
    I'm still in Love wit chu

    All I need is one chance
    To show you what I mean
    I know you know that no one's
    Grass will ever be this green
    Come back home papi
    Cause you've got me like a fiend
    I'm craving for that thuggish love
    You know what I mean
    Come ease this pain inside my heart
    You've got me on my knees
    Stay or go one thing we both know....
    IM THE ONE YOU NEED!:cry:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' this one here, the real deal!
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one was a masterpiece!

    Feeling this deeply, you know I can relate!
    Been there but know this real love is forever
    when you take the good with the bad and
    learn how to forgive one another through
    it all...

    Blessings On Ya House!:heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed felt dis
    true love is forgiven when the bad is made
    and the good of joy
    u posed this so well
    lovin it .................keep flowin'
     
  5. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are definately workable as song lyrics...you go girl...
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this girl!!
     
  7. angelicsage

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    Wow, Alize you really poured in a poetic combination here, love, passion, ultimatums...Felt ur flow!
     
  8. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

    This makes me wanna cry...cuz I feel it too.
     
  9. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dream Weaver:
    I'm glad that you can vibe with me thanks for stopping in

    Angelicsage:
    Your words are always so full of love. Glad that you enjoyed this

    LovelyGoldenOne
    It's always great to hear your comments since you are one of my favorite poets in the family. Thanks girl

    NaShon:
    Thanks for stopping by. It feels great to get the approval of a tru King

    $$RICH$$
    It's always great to see that you stop by one of my threads. We definatly have to vibe sometime soon

    Mslusciousb
    Thanks for the blessings and the loving comments. Im glad that you can relate.
     
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