Black Poetry : Still Feelin' U

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  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still feelin' u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u
    i miss u
    i want u
    cravin this fantasy
    taken me to an estacy
    like dreamin
    in the radiant glist
    where we touch soul
    from things u do and say
    how we laugh & play
    crossin the lines of love
    i'm still feelin u close
    by fate & thy choice
    how sweet it feel inside
    as compassionate love rise
    we mix in rapture
    like it a forever lasting
    feelin u .............tyte joint sis.
     
  3. rapchild

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    right now
    i feel somethin so i think shd write it down
    this feelin makes me wanna smile i cant hide it wit frown
    when ever she is close my heart pound
    girl i want u
    my love is so strong that if i was dead
    my love will hunt u
    u are my life n are all i have left
    since da first day we met
    ive not slept
    i spent all my time thinkin about u
    God what shd i do
    what can i do
    2 make her mine
    God her body one of a kind
    she got that bootylicious behind
    n i wanna kiss it
    eat between her hips like its biscuit


    sweet baby_face ur poem inspired me 2 write this on da spot off da top
    n this will be my reply if someone sent me a poem like that.

    love ya work.
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet baby_face:
    This scrible is hott & passionate


    Seein' yr face in my
    daytime fantasies


    Sista I am really diggin' on
    this joint. for real.


    rapchild:
    Your flo back was too cute.:)
     
  5. afroprincess

    afroprincess Active Member MEMBER

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    i can honestly say that I think most of us have been in a situation of this sort... I think you maybe on to something...write it out don't go do it...Great poem keep it coming
     
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    sounds like marvin gaye been here let's get it on!:kiss:
     
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    thanks y'all
    4everluv glad u like it.
     
  8. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To $$RICH$$


    days ain't been lookin'
    the same
    way
    that they have been b4..
    u
    'cause no1
    touch
    like u do
    got me headstrung
    co-signin' to yr every statement
    like "me too"
    wishin u were here
    and not there
    or wherever
    however
    make no mistakes
    I still see u and me
    rich on love
    and in flight
    wantin'
    needin'
    desirin'
    cravin'
    missin'
    u and me
    when things were so right
    but right now
    I don't wanna let go
    of this passion so strong
    cause it's worth holdin' on
    if u still feelin me...
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well don't miss this
    i will quickly dismiss
    all those
    who try to compete
    and for yr love
    I'll come back in an instant
    with no hestitations
    second guessin'
    askin myself multiple qwestions
    'cause what u give me
    will be never be second best
    i must confess
    my body got weak
    i needs to be a patient
    anxiously waitin'
    for u to come back
    i've been anticipatin'
    for u to come back to me
    sometimes yr love feels like a drug
    so gimme my IV
    just dreamin' of the night
    suckin yr bottom lip
    when u hold me
    grab my hips
    and slap my booty
    so...baby boy
    ...Are U Still Feelin' ME?
     
  10. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much 4everluv.
    :grouphug: every1.
     
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