Black Poetry : Still Black (Part 3)

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now if you ask me! I would
    say the color white is not bad
    at all though bland It is the basic
    color to make the gray scale
    pale to steel

    By now I am asking why tan?
    your accomplishing shades of tan
    sometimes a honey brown if you
    use the right oils

    Must be nice for you to spend the
    whole summer able to see the
    world’s darker side, a face
    reflected in your own burnt umber
    stage

    Don’t change the color of your eyes!
    stop putting those hazel contacts in
    that glisten with shades of green

    Your own eyes are beautiful, the gray
    blue it says you. You’re like a flower
    sensitive way down to the root
    not sure whether to squander or sleep
    stale tall blonde and all, should you
    cover your face and weep?

    Were two of the same your like the sky
    cascading with milky gleams of star
    kissed twinkles, I am the essence of Earth
    tall brown ruffled like the stead fast oak
    and I know the language of every leaf

    Where both just women one know lesser
    than the other, just two that watches to many
    commercials, from a TV world we try to
    build around what’s really real, you see
    its just the black and white of it

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  2. PurpleMoons

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    QUEEN, QUEEN, QUEEN! I read 1,2, and 3. All hot! feelin it ,vibin to it, and fienin it! What can I say? Loved it!
     
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    Queen I almost appluaded you...But then I realized I was in mycomputer room and that this isn't an audience :)<clappin in my heart and hollering for your beautiful poetry
     
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    1 THRU 3 ....U SPILLING TRUTH...WATCHA SELF. SOMEBODY GONNA MESS AROUND AND SLIP ON IT. :)
     
  5. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Everyone!

    Purple Moon, SwtT, Royal T

    Thanks so much everyone for the kind words... Just keep it real Ya'll

    AqueenPassing
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