Black Poetry : Still at it- the musical

mysslez

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The prelude

I don’t want you.
How could I?
You touched her.
(My eyes are green ‘cuz I eat a lot of vegetables,
it don’t have nothing to do with your new friend)
I don’t want you.
Or do I?
I don’t need u.
How could I?
Anything you could do, you did.
I left you alone.
But can’t leave you alone….

The act

Climb on top of me and take me away from here.
Take me from controlled desire to uncontrollable feeling.
Your lick, your thrust, your caress.
My willingness to be better than Vanessa del Rio.
(I don’t wanna stop just because people walking by are watching us)
I’m tighter than physically.
Deeper than mentally.
Warmer than the country.
You……
You’re deeper than……
As deep as……
Stop thinking.
I’ll just enjoy the ride.
You plunge with passion.
I receive with purpose.
Bare as the day we were born…….

Intermission

It was just like I remember it
Except for you were with me….only.
Only?
Why can’t it be like it was….
except for honest this time……
(Faded pictures in a broken glass,
like a mirror revealing what a woman is feeling)

And again

Comin’ back for more.
It’s how we do.
Flesh on flesh.
Sweat on sweat.
Drowning in the sea of iniquity.
Redeemed by the saving grace of lust.
(Go on and hit it, that’s what it’s made for)

The end…for now

Territorial scarring of your teeth on my neck
My fingernails on your back
Traces of me on your face
Remnants of you….in me
****.
Some things never change.
(So many tears I cried, so much pain inside,
but baby it ain’t over ‘til it’s over)



-R.A.W.
ori. September 28, 2004
rev. September 28, 2004
 
sister this spelled deep in more ways
than what I knew possible...
love the way you broke it down
into acts...of love, lust, passion and desire...
very nice...the way you wove songs into the stanzas
I was feeling the emotion in this piece...
it billowed like wind with passion...
Great writing...equals a great read!

love this peace...poet
 

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