Black Poetry : Steps Towards Freedom

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by prophet2, Nov 9, 2001.

  1. prophet2

    prophet2 Active Member MEMBER

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    Steps towards freedom

    This walk of freedom
    Will be marred and scared
    With disappointment
    Triumph and adversity
    All set up to discourage me
    But I won't be discouraged

    This walk of freedom
    Will have a trail of death
    Destruction and pain
    Fill with despair and
    Seemingly no gain
    But I won't be discouraged

    This walk of freedom
    Will consist of falls
    And stumbles
    Getting up and being torn down
    Decisions being made in the beginning to win
    But I won't be discouraged

    This walk of freedom
    Is the walk of champions
    The walk of the fearless
    The walk of the focused
    The walk of the giants
    The walk of Christ
    And the walk that is just for me

    This walk of freedom
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed

    this walk of truth enlighten my day
    coz life seems this way

    com'on speaketh dem words ya heard me.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back to hear da truth of P2
    shhhhhhhh!!
    listen ......flow on speaketh
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you $$RICH$$
    for bring it back
    this is a tight piece here....
    feelin it...Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the encouragement from this flow is indeed powerful
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very determined flow..I could feel those lines speaking out.
     
  7. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    prophet,
    SPEAK!; powerful poem, step up---------

    Peace and Blessings
     
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