Black Poetry : Steps of an embrace

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Adolescent nervousness embraced by love
    I held her close to me as we stood
    Eye to eye, face to face, as I looked
    Into her hazel eyes and smiled;

    I placed my hands in the small of
    Her back puling her closer to me
    So that my heart shall mesh with
    Hers until they beat in harmony;

    I look to her whispering in her ear
    To close her eyes for the rays of love
    Were so bright that all I could see
    Was her reflection in the shadows;

    She lifted her hands over my shoulders
    So that I was surrounded by her love
    And closed her smiled to become a
    Place of anticipation of my delivery;

    I lifted one hand to outline her eyebrows
    And trace the dynamics of her face so
    I could push her hair away from her face
    And gently lovingly play with her ear;

    She lets out a sigh as her head adjust to
    Receive my touches and I smile as she
    Bites her bottom lip slightly so not to
    Vocally express her intimate joy;

    I place the fullness of my hand upon her
    Cheek allowing my long fingers to extend
    Up the side as my thumb rested on her
    Cheek so that she may rest her head;

    This is when I move closer to her, outlining
    The dimensions of her cheek bone with the
    Gentleness of my kisses tracing and retracing
    My steps as she smiles from the celebration;

    And as I return to just below her lips I kiss
    The spot between her chin and her bottom
    Lip that she bites so anxiously and I quietly
    move up to enjoy the sweetness of her kiss;
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was intricately sweet and sensual. Quite a lovely scribe, flow on brotha.
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you poet, for the read and reflection

    one.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aw, this is sweet. I was with you every line.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love floating in the gardens i see
    awesome sweetly laid out brutha D.
     
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    oh...i like this wow nice flow
     
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    A sweeter embrace there's not.
     
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    each line...each motion...as it led me closer to da sweet climax...sweet read.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i missed Valentine's Day this year on the site, but i wanted to drop this one on ya again...
     
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    big ups this was one to treasure
     
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