Black Poetry : Step one

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Aug 10, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walking away from hurt and pain
    guilt and rage
    misused
    abused
    selfish ambition
    accepting anything
    not caring
    but now i can feel that my space
    is being taken up by hateful words
    false hope
    and desiring lust
    deception
    always guessing
    always confessing
    always up to no good
    Walking away
    Step one....
     
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    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Thoughtfull, healing. A very good first step. Thank you.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you dwarf

    I appreciate your response
    hearing your thoughts....
     
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