Black Poetry : STEP BY STEP.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ibrahim, Feb 8, 2006.

  1. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FOR A DEAR FRIEND OF MINE.


    Everyday you make me smile
    Let me know u care
    Help me see the good in things
    For me you're always there
    Everyday u ease my pain
    Help me through my day
    You let me know i am not alone
    You teach me love that way
    Everyday i say a prayer
    To keep u safe and free
    Everyday is filled with hope
    That you will spend time with me
    Everyday u show me love
    Wanting nothing back from me
    You let me know u'r my friend
    Keeping me company
    Everyday i look around
    Even when my life is a mess
    Knowing in my heart of hearts
    My friends are just the best
    Everyday i thank the lord for having me
    I thank the lord for having given me
    The very best that i have
    Which is u as my friend .​
     
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    Beautiful Poet
    This was very touching
    Friend within and out
    Loving your flow poet
    Much Love
     
  3. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much Love to you Tantrum the Great.
    I appreciate it.
    1 Love.
     
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    ibriham oh my im feeling this and the poet of this piece. my my my is all i can say keep it coming baby. im hungry for ya at this point.:hearts1: :hearts1:
     
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    True friendship is priceless , endearing and feels good
    to have and hold i too pray daily for what i was given
    and who share my days of living ....this was a true GEM !
     
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    Wonderful write Ibrahim!
    So beautiful poet!:hearts1:
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed.
    Thx for the response
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are a beautiful Poet too.
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nevarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
    :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers:
     
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    A friend to you, I will always be...
    anywhere you look, you're bound to see me

    I'm compelled to stay until the end
    because you are to me...the sweetest friend

    And it's I, who thank God for finding you
    and for you...there's nothing I won't do

    I love you Ibrahim, man your the best
    yes, I choose you among all the rest

    I love this piece poet...you got it going on
     
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