Quiet Poetry Lounge : Steal Her Heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Apr 18, 2008.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is a crazy situation
    Now, I'm in an awkward position
    Trying to get my foot in the door
    Wondering the price for admission
    See, she has a significant other
    But, I have an intuition
    If I start moving in slowly
    She will show opposition

    I’m pondering the best approach
    The best means of inquisition
    Bringing to mind the best words to speak
    To make an ideal proposition
    So, I’m going to make an effort
    Make it some kind of little mission
    As, I marvel at her appearance
    And her entire disposition

    The way I'll move in, steal her heart
    He'll think I'm some type of magician
    Because, he may holding the keys
    But they are not in the ignition
    I hear her say she wants a "real man"
    I understand her definition
    Hoping she's ready to talk about it
    Lord knows, I am ready to listen

    Ready to be anything she needs
    Ready to meet any condition
    Constantly she stays in my thoughts
    Stimulating my growing ambition
    Bring her the happiness she desires
    All I need is her permission
    Going to give her a better option
    Hoping she'll make the right decision
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOnderful Scribe
    A Lead to the Way of Love, in your heart you know she is there:hearts2:
    Don't Stop the Magic!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just beautiful when movin into a str8 n' narrow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, and you mean business. Hopefully, he's not just playing at it, cause your not. Great rhyme scheme here, and I felt your determination poet.
     
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    arthur:
    I really liked the flow of this piece and
    the fact that you are not easily intimidated.
    This was too cute.

    Much Luv
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow
    I love it.
    Your poems speak of patience
    serenity, timing. Giving me the hope
    that it will happen because your drop feels
    so so right. :)

    Peace
     
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