Quiet Poetry Lounge : Stayin' full

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Apr 4, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This is my story
    Not a lie told on me.
    There is a reason for periods like these.
    Time will always speak from both sides.
    There is no way around without a pick up breath.
    Taking a usual break to resurface the guide.
    No I can not be taken back absently.
    Only sanely the way is automatically left.
    For us to travel and next year feel the memory just the same this year.
    Perfectly things stand and substain why individuality brings us back with logic to hold onto as mine never losing the come around.
     
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    I enjoyed this! The highlighted lines struck me the most.

    Applied to my own life/experiences and "breaths" and "guides," I can so relate!

    Nice piece! :toast:
     
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    That has to make me happy. We both going through it.
     
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