Black Poetry : ...STAY...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a song i wrote...jus because...no particular reason it jus came to me...enjoy...

    Verse 1:
    I need you to stay
    Stay with me today cuz baby
    Don’t know what to else to say
    To tell you that im sorry baby

    Jus stay here with me
    I don’t know what tomorrow brings
    But hopefully
    You’ll be right here holdin’ me, lovin’ me
    so

    Chorus:
    Stay with me
    I know your hurtin, I know your mad
    But baby don’t go hurtin by yourself
    And please give me
    Another chance to prove myself
    And prove my love for you is here
    Stay and it won’t leave
    I know your shaken, I know your down
    But you’d be better if you stayed around with me

    Verse 2:
    This silence ain’t workin
    This quiet ain’t workin for me baby
    Jus please say something
    Yell at me, scream at me, say one thing

    Say whatever you feel but don’t leave
    I need you here with me baby
    Lovin me, savin me, baby please
    Hopefully we will be

    Chorus:
    Stay with me
    I know your hurtin, I know your mad
    But baby don’t go hurtin by yourself
    And please give me
    Another chance to prove myself
    And prove my love for you is here
    Stay and it won’t leave
    I know your shaken, I know your down
    But you’d be better if you stayed around with me

    Verse 3:
    This was my mistake
    And every night I sit and pray
    That God will show you his grace
    And show you my love is here to stay

    Now this is my plea
    For you not to leave me
    For us to fight faithfully
    To bring back you and me to

    Chorus:
    Stay with me
    I know your hurtin, I know your mad
    But baby don’t go hurtin by yourself
    And please give me
    Another chance to prove myself
    And prove my love for you is here
    Stay and it won’t leave
    I know your shaken, I know your down
    But you’d be better if you stayed around with me
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Actually feelin this right here. Nicely written lovely.:) Keep up the good work my sista.:)

    1 luv

    AM
     
  3. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Stay......................
    I love every verse
    the asking and staying to free yaself
    wow !

    keep droppin lyrical maze on us and get dat music for it ..
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm better when YOU staaaaaaaaaaaaay around...

    Thanks for sharing, dear.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now all it need is some music behind it and you got a winner.
     
  7. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the song it was tight, I can feel where you was coming from
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody :)
     
  9. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was lovely, Lovely. I'd like to hear the music to it.
    One love
     
  10. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful song:love:
     
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