Black Poetry : Stay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Mar 19, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...stay.
     
  2. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll give u more then a season
    to love thee is a good reason
    i am the nubian swin ya yo king
    as i look across the land
    u and i make a stand
    come as u r for i will crown u Queen
    of nubia.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Nice work girlfriend!
    keep it comin'....I like this flow.
     
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    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u r my sunshyne all 4 seasons
    our poetic flow of love be a
    reason as we begun under the rising
    sun for a lifetyme of what i feel
    u know the deal thats masterful
    and yo rays r shyning the reason
    of the right season is our lifetyme
    to shyne be mines....
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you guys make me Shyne...

    N~LOVER...
    i missed you!! thanks
    for the read my dear...
    as always you are appreciated!

    N2...
    sister dear!!...
    thanks for feelin' my flow... :)

    PM (my Nubian Kang)...
    all 4 seasons, huh??
    well we shall see... won't we?
    thanks for the read! you know
    you are my love... ;)
     
  6. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful flow sunshyne
    gurl u be da bomb
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakgurl...

    Hella nice!!! I ain't goin' nowhere!!! ;)
    L&R
    GQ
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I learned a very important lesson when it comes to love..
    Do not seek... :nono:
    Dont try to find....
    because God has your love...:love:
    already in mind....
    We often try to seek our mates, but let God
    choose, he knows all. With him
    we can't lose....

    Mmmmm sounds like a poem, may get a floe going with this
    response....:glasses:
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love....

    HONEY...
    thanks for the read sis!
    glad you enjoyed the flow...
    keep comin' back!! :)

    GQ...
    don't you dare go anywhere!!
    what would i do without you?
    i don't even wanna know!!
    thanks for the read.

    NITA...
    this wasn't about seeking or
    finding... simply searching
    for the reason why he came...
    thanks for the constant love!

    LovesAllInYourFaces...
    Sunshyne~
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interplay

    A nice interplay of words, subtle rhyme and feeling--well done--Amun-Ra
     
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