Black Poetry : Stay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Feb 24, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said if you stayed any longer
    you didn't know if you could stop.
    I've kissed your lips stronger
    than I ever have before.
    And you said you would go,
    but you couldn't move your feet.
    So then I didn't know,
    how you'd react when I
    started slow grinding
    to a mute tune, playing
    in our heads, never minding
    the clothes loosening
    becoming unbinding
    heading over to the bed,
    but ending up on the floor
    on top of me, rewinding
    that kiss, glancing at the door
    that you meant to exit ten
    minutes ago, this feeling
    is too strong, can't leave,
    it's got us both reeling
    and dealing with the
    emotions thrust into play.
    I said, let's not fight it
    any more, relax....
    Stay.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my I bet he did !!!
    the vision i made of this
    can't be on T.V....woooooweeeee!!
    flow on and stay play do it yo way
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ you, Rich. Maybe that vision would be allowed on cable.....Appreciating your response as always, thank you.
     
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    wow this was :hot: nice one sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is...u did your job, and quite WELL at that. you got it going on...here's hoping that when he got up the next morning he...forgot where he dropped his clothes... :wink: :spin: :wink:
    I think I'll try that tonight...okay...lights...out...I'm... :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
    I enjoyed this one...thanks
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater, glad you liked this one.
    TeeHee, queentswana...hoping he forgot where he dropped his clothes...lol. I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness, THIS is purely and completely DOPE!!!! mmm mmm mmm, sister. :D
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gempis, lol, for diggin this vibe of my imagination.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...Sister...

    this is "So Universal"....
    on so many levels...

    Wow...I loved it from the first
    stanza, and I stayed until the last..

    Beautiful Work!
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice and hot
     
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