Black Poetry : Stay inside the lines

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, May 10, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    testing testing testing
    do you read me correctly?
    I mean did your "pen soul"
    fill in the correct bubble?
    A B C D or all of the above?

    I've been checking your
    paper to see if you understand
    me / if you were in the 95th percentile
    you "over"stand me /
    however after further review
    you did not stay inside the parameters
    of that oblong shape that elLIPtical
    shape that Oh-val...O well I told
    you to study the right way...
    cramming to understand
    what I'm composed ov
    where I stand "inner-cranially"
    may leave you scratching your
    head if not observed correctly...
    maybe you need to view me under
    blak light to see if I'm authentic /
    you can hold me up to the sun but
    you won't see that strip on my hip
    "to see if i'm real" cause my melanin "ain't
    havin' it"
    so you need to study the right way
    if you want to pass...
    interest is gauged by the time
    spent studying and observing and
    taking care not to
    "scribble outside the elLIPtical shape"

    pick one:

    0 A. You
    0 B. Me
    0 C. Us
    0 D. fantasy filled
    0 E. all ov the above

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    "10"

    Nuff said!!
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh

    I am SO wide awake now, y'all!

    blak, this is OUTSTANDING!

    oh yeeeeah :D

    a
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    E!

    this heah was right on time.
    -7
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb,

    man you bring a new meaning to SAT (Sexually Activating Test) :D

    i gotta tip my het to you on this one....

    :toast:
     
  6. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most Adept

    :uzi: blowin up the spot wit dis one ...period.

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see...

    the King of Scribe has arrived just in time to mentally "do" our minds like he always does!!!

    Brilliant piece Blak!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:

    'Verb'....so good to read you again!!
    this one is tight panties as usual!!

    Where do you go to bring back your flow??
    That's what I wanna know!!

    *wheredoyougo*
     
  9. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    tyte tyte tyte BlakVerb!!!

    carefully tracing
    then coloring
    the elLIPtical shape
    next to E

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank ya'll!

    one love,blak
     
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