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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Oct 4, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dotn want u to end up another percentage
    statisticin prison that could ahve been free
    fukced up cuz thats how the systems is designed to be
    i dont want u ruinning ur life in hopes of fullfill
    arms open waiting for gifts from money dirty with drugs
    u been to close to ehll already, why would u want to
    spend ur life there, permanently?
    i dont want to loose my wise brother mother birthed
    b/c you have as much talent as failures
    i dont need to be
    shouldnt be the first to graduate with a degree
    cuz u got caught up in the fast lane
    of a weary slow life that only leadsa onme way
    down
    i dont want u to turn out like the man we hate
    wit nothing to give ur kids
    but reasons to distrust ur family
    cuz they never cum threw in times of need
    i want u to come pushing threw this
    not just for me and moms
    btu do this ****tt for u
    i want u to gain control over ur life
    gain a sense of who u are and should be
    rather than spending ur time filling misconceptions and false realities
    stop lying to urself abouot who u r
    cuz i kno it hurt s to look at a reflection of a diferent u
    i dotn wan tot loose my brother
    i dont want to loose
    u to this twisted system that we live threw
    i need u to realize life is more than just time
    to waste
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    "realize life is more than time to waste"

    wise words daroc...keep flowing..
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely posed deep flowing enjoyed this read...flow on...
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling the love in this hear peace!
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: Nice drop and time waits 4 no man or woman, so do ya thing! ;)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Python, time moves on, with us, or without us. Hearing your message, and liking the way you flowed with it. You can help open someone's eyes, but you can't force them to see.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well posed flow indeed time waits for no one at all
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see my young sista is gettin wise and speakin truth i can dig that fa sho my sista :)
     
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    ...this was felt sister
    too often, we fail to speak up
    and pulled our loved ones
    close to us...when we see
    them stray from the path
    we know they are destined...

    this was a peace...full of truth
    and raw confessions of the heart

    Nice work poet!
     
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