Black Poetry : State of shock….

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is me in writers block....
    so i am like just rambling
    out loud as my mind roams....lol
    ....much love to who reads....

    State of shock….
    Roamin
    yearnin
    Wonderin
    When its comin to me
    It was so profound…..
    Almost lost my mind.
    Runnin and backin up…
    Scared of da taste it gave….
    A bliss of sweet feelings
    Grew as……
    He extended his hand
    And took my heart
    Da pleasure
    Da love
    No resitin…
    Its persistin…..
    Got me twisted
    In da state of shock…..
    Dreamers
    dream
    sleepers
    sleep
    anticipation
    ramblin
    stumbling……
    I will slow it down..
    Got me flyin da skies
    And climbin mountains
    Let me come up for air…..
    Didn’t try to define me
    But claim me as his own
    And watches me…. bloom
    In summer
    Winter
    Spring..
    and fall
    in
    Da
    State of shock….but
    he is mine I am his...as he watches his Black Rose unfold... :luvv:


    blkangel thang.....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah my sister
    this is tight
    wonderful
    i see no block:)
    nice flow sis
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da block is only a min
    dis was tyte seem like it's gone now
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this is a block, then I'm scared of you...nice scribe.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man..thankz family
    the support is lovely but i am block...
    much love to yall wow..thanks again....Angel
     
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    Your block is completely different then my block.

    When I'm blockin' I can't write, I don't even try.

    But when U block, it's still nice.

    Whatdadilly?
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da love is all i can say....glad ya like
     
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    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    from a slither into your tee,
    out apex centered in the crossroads,
    equaled full circle fourth key,
    notes pitch toning brains into total shock,
    twisting your first,
    digging into your second,
    shifting you into third,
    completely soaked in at fourth,
    the political spoken word speech powered electricity,
    surging straight array nervously faster than nano,
    over borders from state to state,
    leaking watery puddles dripping breathing live,
    before every eye over bridge to the next eye awaiting,
    follow me out the skies hottest touch rubber shoes sparks skeleton,
    absolutely frozen muscular convulsion out of control clocked,
    dropping revved up shaking bass pounding back out explosion,
    the deeper i go,
    the higher i concoct,
    all fluids flew out holes released hot,
    jawbones popped,
    lungs collapse stopped,
    knees buckled and nose full of snot,
    eyes locked,
    the state of total shock!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me holla at you for a second
    they bout to pray for you
    going full spend ahead
    skipped first went to second
    ya lite weight Ima a og
    first name MzBlk last name Angel
    one that cant be matched
    outspoken that cant be
    out written
    the trouble maker
    the poetic poetically proper
    passionate Mzblkangel
    the one and only
    Let me holla at you for a second
    I shake it up and lay it down
    third gear going straight to fourth
    the state of shock is just the first part
    taught by the best wrote with top-grade
    a love poet a thug writer hey thas me
    something that make
    you think hmmm
    make you fly with birds
    have you looking at the moon
    trying to catch the sun
    going oh-wee....
    see I twist words
    love the line after line
    the bliss
    the twist
    word play the
    dancing with out the music
    making you do hand stands
    doing that slow two step to a R-Kelly joint
    bringing it back up just enough to bobbing ya head to
    my beat......
    Hail Angel full of poetic love baby bow your head
    a queen just walk in Angel is back
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blaq enjoyed your flow alot
     
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