Black Poetry : start to think

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    I start to think ….then I sink into the paper
    like I was ink
    When am writing am trapped in between the lines
    I escape
    when I finish the lines

    they tell me if I can see the shore then am not deep
    and if my
    eyes are open and I still cant see
    then I must be sleep
    and if am monogamous with some one promiscuous
    does it benefit me to creep
    and if they showing sex on TV
    how in the hell radio gone have beeps

    cause this for those peeps that think out side of the box
    that think full circle that cant define
    where I start to stop
    cause I
    I skate side ways hey , so those that hate are left to marinate in they fate
    Wait
    Its bad when the culprit looks like me
    Or in the same skin as me I can’t be duplicated by these powers that be
    Cause this dome
    Cant be cloned am like…. mike Jackson
    U gots ta leave me alone…but if u must
    Don’t stop until u gets enough
    I’ve changed but stayed the same like p diddy opps I mean puff
    Aint that some stuff

    On these forums I spit straight sewage with the flowitch pass this flewitch
    I got Nike ink pens so when I write
    I just do it
    Cause this earthly got me fucccked up like no tithing
    But we paying taxes like the kiss of death lays on the cheeks of these embalmed assss
    Getting cold shoulders from solders who used to help me move boulders
    Went though so much shyit when I was young
    never knew I would make it to being older
    Grand mama’s gone now and I can’t even hold her
    Cause all I got is memories tears
    Toasted over Hennessey’s with these fake catz that pretend to be
    Real

    Like sexual harassment I need soming I can feel
    Emotions deeper than oceans cause me to drown my sorrows in dank
    and cognac potions
    mixture misery be like a permanent fixture
    for that reason I compose these ghetto scriptures..
    cause hookup be the street name equivalent to king James
    burn your heart and turn your flickers into flames
    cause a wise man told me threw death u see life
    and could this be the circle of life ? 360 degrees evolving
    I reminisce on revolving 357 degrees
    who knew 3 degree was the thin red line
    this real life shyit yawl its just coincidental that it rhyme
    cause this life I live Aint for me its for u
    and god gave me gray skies so yours could be blue
    and when it rains it pours and when the wind blows
    im taking the roof and u can film the shyit if u need poof
    and if u read my ENDOCTRINED NATION piece consider this part two
    cause most the catz that’s hating would take the last from me
    but they hate me its blasphemy






    Im just saying this has to be some of the illest shyit I ever seen
    Fake catz always trying to be down on your team
    Trying to stick u for your cream and then when u catch they assss they like

    dammmn dawg
    What u mean?

    And I like pimp don’t play me cause my 6th sense is keen
    matter of fact im a hustler
    so im the background of your scene ,I walk slow like Jason but ill blow that *** to smithereens …I bring that funk like g Clinton do with no Listerine
    im known to blow trees on preach tree street while looking for peaches
    but also known to take long walks like Jill Scott on hidden beaches
    im trying to sell out the front rows to the bleachers
    consider to be a leader but I still pack a heater I don’t give a fuccck about a 3 piece suit
    Jeans, Tims and wife beaters and all you poets who run your mouths like cab meters .how u done question me im I my brotha's keeper cause I start to think. …Then I sink into the paper
    like I was ink
    When am writing am trapped in between the lines
    I escape
    when I finish the lines
    we all got soul …peace …hookup
    :thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head sho ya right soulful we all pose
    this ink drop like a beautiful rose
    tyte hook us on up and be thy keeper.....
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes there is much to think about, and write about when we really open up our eyes to look without and within. Loved the word play brotha. Flow on.
     
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    peace,

    no doubt hookup, drop it likes it hot..........

    peace
     
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    wow this was adeepthinkingsoulfull Poem...


    and i escaped to somthimes bewteen the lines...




    but i liked the end......


    sounds like you had a full house their up in youre head...

    but it was interesting to read..

    write on poet...






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    im known to blow trees on preach tree street while looking for peaches
    but also known to take long walks like Jill Scott on hidden beaches
    im trying to sell out the front rows to the bleachers
    consider to be a leader but I still pack a heater I don’t give a fuccck about a 3 piece suit
    Jeans, Tims and wife beaters and all you poets who run your mouths like cab meters...


    thas what i'm talkin bout...
    "i never thought he would come back like that....str8 blastin" --menace 2 society

    one love
    khasm
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spittin it like venom...whoa----King James u say...uh huh

    and again...I see u flexed it to the end :weights:

    Come to think of it...What do you bench poetically? :coffee:


    Baby...you are INTENSE...and I LOVE IT!!!!! :luv:
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a phat joint my brother spiting mad poetic truth..u on fire.
     
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