Black Poetry : starstrike

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternalprince, May 7, 2002.

  1. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    Pages stained tears
    Bowed and broken
    And in pain since the beginning
    Please hold me
    So I can fall apart
    So I can crumble to dust
    And dispearse the throughout reality
    Please cry for me
    Bring rivers to this desert
    And the possibility
    Of beauty in a life that gets uglier everyday
    Open your heart
    Promise compassion
    Because she that I love
    Has none
    Destiny has no place for one
    Who whould never have been born
    I am not quite
    And I might
    But probably not
    Love
    Live
    Let go
    Succeed.
    So close and so far
    So much for my star
    Its been crossed
    Out.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i'm lovin' it! welcome...lookin' forward to seein' mo' from you. i have read it twice because i am really lovin' the word usage in this melancholy piece. stay awhile and scribe some mo' and some mo' and some mo'....
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your entrance has been felt no doubt..

    i dig it :toast:
    jh.
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word.

    Somber moods have born many a great writer,

    It's honesty at it's most personal.

    this was large !
     
  5. eternalprince

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    "thank you for feeling my pain" he says with a single tear filling his eyes," thank you"
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as long as it's a single tear. Okay - let's get this money !!!