Black Poetry : starship

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  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    3 years...
    married bliss...
    3 years
    of unity
    we now
    b 2 entities
    often in the same
    bed...but alone...
    often in the same
    room but
    never there...
    there is no there, there.
    3 years...and
    i'm still
    grounded on the earth...
    u shoulda've been
    the starship
    to take
    me up...
    somewhere along the way...
    u ran out of fuel.



    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flo and I can truely relate.

    Much Luv
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can relate well done
     
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    Whew... Your words have touched the reality of many, such a well posed scribe, poet, and the ending hit hard.
     
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    is the fuel love?

    you need a gas station kinda woman. dadada mean, scybe.
    good flow brethren
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo much love to you

    Sis 4EVERLUV


    Loving you Bro RICH$

    Loving you Sis WATZ


    Much love to you Bro SHA'IYN
     
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    Loved every word, **** that kind of fuel is expensive 2. Costs a lot of sacrifice...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang


    somebody needs my boot camp lol

    but you know life can be drawn out a times

    but i understand where you are coming from poet

    peace
     
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    :em4600:
    Let's put the whole deck of cards on the table,
    instead of this one sided tinted lable

    I was there for you through thick and thin,
    knocked hard at your heart, but couldn't get in

    In our bed, we slept back to back,
    yet I can't recall, how we got off track

    You ever stop to think, that my fuel never ran low?
    without you in my starship ...I had nowhere to go.
     
  10. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thank you all for feeling me!!!! Ya'll real sweet peeps!
     
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