Black Poetry : Stars

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Vision, Jan 20, 2006.

  1. Vision

    Vision Active Member MEMBER

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    Stars


    Twinkling sparkling in the sky
    Lovely, bright and pleasing to the eye
    I wonder what it would be like up there so far
    To see things from the point of view of a star

    They are way up their so high
    Shimmering brightly in the nigh
    What a vantage point they must have up there
    As they look down at us looking up at them with no fear

    The earth must look so peaceful
    As the stars can hardly see us people
    We must be so small to them seemingly
    Yet we can see them from millions of miles shining brightly

    I wonder what looking down from a star would be like
    Would it be fun, thrilling or something I would dislike
    It would be a different feeling to look down at the earth
    You would see no war, no racism, no dying, and no hurt

    To visit and spend time on a star would be a great adventure
    I will put that on my wish list before my earthly departure
    But even if I do not get my wish one should still be happy with their uniqueness and who they are
    And I heard a voice say “That’s right” a voice that came from way above the stars.


    Written by Jadeson
     
  2. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhhh.... I wish upon a star, I love to look up at the sky...it always takes me so far away....Thank you this was very relaxing
     
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    great flow poet flow on :couple:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    starz are rare jewels gleamming
    this expressed the beauty above
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision what a beautiful vision this piece was:kiss1:
     
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    The stars are what keep the human mind balanced...........

    beautiful scribe poet!!
     
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    Vision - The light rays not slowed by the atmosphere arrive slightly ahead of the light rays that are slowed by the atmosphere and that time difference is what we call a Twinkling. Many believe that there is a voice in the twinkle as is so aptly created in your scribe. Very nicely done, Namyh
     
  8. Vision

    Vision Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments everyone God bless you all and your families and all the people you are connected to and yet to be connected to in Jesus Name I pray amen Hallelujah
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww this is so nice........


    so beautifull......



    i imagined this ones to......






    me sitting on a star....
    (well not alone )...





    beautifull ....



    welcome poet :wave:





    Loveauroraflower:heart:....
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this drop
    I think we all have from time to time
    Wondered what it would be from a star
    Im feeling this poet
     
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