Black Short Stories : Starman: world tour part one

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    * we join our heroes, the megasquad on a saturday morning, we see nike and starman at the breakfast table, with sydney(frostbite),Desiree(psychogirl), and CJ (soundwave) holding flags. Hotshot enters the room*
    Hotshot: what are you two doing?
    Sydney: theyre having a eating contest. first one to finish wins
    Hotshot: thsoe are MOUNTAINS OF FOOD though.
    Nike: you better bet on me man
    Starman: why? its already begun! *starts eating*
    CJ: GO!*swings flags*
    Starman: *thinking* wow so much has changed in the past few months, seems like yesterday we wre the worst crmininals in the us now were backed by the government. and it seems like ever since my family got killed by Royal X supersoldier has been more like a father to me. I remember our first meeting.......

    *four months ago, during the formation of the megasquad and our heroes search for their parents*
    Volt: I see the base guys!
    Starman: *up in the air* i see something too but its a jet.
    Hotshot: THATS THE EDF!
    Frostbite: really?
    Hotshot: no, its the postal offic
    Nike: awww maannn not my dad
    psychogirl: oh yeah isnt your dad
    *the people in the edf jet get out one by one. First out is a man in a blue and red suit.*
    Blur: Nike, son what are you doing with these fugiitives? i know you found out about your powers but just let the gov. experiment on you
    Nike: NO DAD NO! im not a guinea pig! none of us are!
    *another person steps out. a puerto rican man in a grey wolf suit*
    Greywolf: so these are the kids weve been chasing? all this for kids? wow government is slacking off
    *another man in a golden robosuit steps out*
    Techraider: Techraider ready to get this over with
    *a six foot six black woman walks out with a scythe*
    Amazon: could someone explain to me why were fighting children?
    Starman: hey whats with the disrespect?
    *A asian man with fire around him floats down from the jet with a sword*
    Kusanagi: few mortals do deserve respect. and you deserve none you child
    Starman: ill make you respect my fist!
    Doc halworth: now chill children.
    *A tall black man with braids walks out*
    Supersoldier: so doc we meet again man. now youve got kids and your a criminal? should of stayed with us. now give up or else
    Volt: HOW ABOUT NO!
    Kusanagi: IM READY FOR A RUMBLE
    *starman hits kusanagi into the desert underground*
    Starman: ITS ALREADY BEGUN
     
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    very nicely done diggin dis story line..............
     
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    Starman: haah what about mortals now? AAAAAAAAAAA
    Supersoldier: *nails starman in back with a haymaker* come quietly or ill use excessive force!
    Nike: dad im not gonna let them experiment on me
    Blur: son, facility q has good intentions. we must now what makes genefreaks tick
    Nike: you just dont want them to know doyou pops? about your "secret"
    Blur: HURRH*runs over and him and nike start fighting*
    Nike: whoo *dodges the punch* you forgot pops im faster than you! *nails his pops in the gut a couple times toknock him out* too strategic for ya! AUUHUHHHHHHHHH* gets blasted by techraider in the back* dang who got me???*falls unconscious*Techraider: subject two caught*hotshot and greywolf with volt and the doc*
    Volt: what are you gonna do? you dont even have any powers!
    Greywolf: but i have this! *drops a neuralizer bomb that disables them*fools subjects seven eight and ten caught*
    *techraider and CJ(soundwave) fight*
    CJ: TURN IT UP!* BLASTS SOUNDWAVES AT HIM*
    techraider: easy. dealt with someone like you on my first mission*pulls out a techshield and reflects it back at him* teens. think they own the world
    *back to starman* IM not going out that easy! *flies back up and locks fist with supersoldier*
    Supersoldier: pretty strong kid but watch out!
    Starman: dont try to play me like AHHHHHH *gets hit in back by kusanagi*
    Kusanagi: ILL KILL YOU MORTAL!* flies towards starman*
    Starman: actually your gonna EAT THIS*blasts kusanagi witwh a golden blast* and now for you supersoldier
    Supersoldier: looks like ill have to use excessive force then kid! *comes at starman at superspeed with fist out*
    Starman: HAAH *same thing as supersoldier*
    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM *sonic boom from hit knocks both heroes down*
    starman: woah. i. cant. feel. my hands.
    supersoldier.woah can barely walk *walks over and puts nega-cuffs on starman* under arrest starman aka subject 6476
    Starman: uggghhhhh nooo *falls unconscious and blacks out*
    Kusanagi: that kid is really powerful supersoldier. I sense something strange in him. hes a unique one
    Supersoldier: Me too. barely knows his powers. imagine when he does get them. Techraider, got the other kids?
    Techraider: almost, amazon is taking on the two girls frostbite and psychogirl
    *amazon is fighting against a forcefield*
    psychogirl: frostbite were in trouble!
    frostbite: why?
    psychogirl: were the only two left everybody else has been caught.
    Amazon: give up girls you cant defeat me
    psychogirl: Givve up this! *lifts amazon in the air and tosses her with telekinesis* shell be gone for a while lets try and bust a move
    frostbite: are we gonna come back for the rest of the crew?
    psychogirl: later but right now run!
    *amazon jumps in front of them*
    amazon: too late girls
    psychogirl: but how???!!!
    amazon: *grabs psychogirl and taps her head with something* these gene cuffs will keep her from using her powers. so just come quietly little girl.
    frostbite: NO! *sidney freezes amazon and tries to run but gets caught by tech raider with a nullblast*dang.
    part two coming soon.
     
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    droppin it tyte what a story line
     
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