Black Short Stories : Starman Adventures:Atomix's daughter?

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    *at a mall in detroit three girls are hanging out, names are anita, nicole, and dina,*
    Dina: man its late i gotta get home see ya later!
    Anita: oh yeah but i gotta get something first for my mom
    Nicole: seeya!
    Anita: ok now moms wanted some oj right? yeah *anita's walking when she sees a metal pole come near her* aaaaaaaaaaa *it repels and then more metal junk covers her up* AAAAAA SOMEONE HELP ME *covered in junk*
    *CRUNCH*
    Starman: *punches through metal and gets her out of it* you alright? *flies up away from metal*
    Anita: yeah idunno what happened the nmetal just came at me and stuff i didnt do anything aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    Starman: DANG *punches metal back to the ground* uhh psychogirl hold the metal
    Psychogirl: ILL TRY *uses tk to hold the metal from anita*
    Starman: are you a genefreak?
    Anita: i dont know am i?
    Psychogirl: yeah you are and hold on to stop this im going to have to give you a blackout itll only be for a while.
    Anita: blackout? what are you doing
    Starman: *puts his hand on hers* itll be alright Anita
    Anita: *looks up at aaron* okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay *blacks out
    *meanwhile at Haven, island of genefreaks*
    Atomix:could she really be mine? is that my baby anita?? daddys coming back
    *part two soon*
     
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    nice story brutha ...............
     
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