Black Poetry : starin at my wall pt. wall

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Staring at my Wall (Pt. 1)

    Sitting alone, in my room, staring at posters and pictures
    Dreaming, fantasizing, on how I would get with cha
    On my knees, knelt down ask my father a favor
    I know in my heart, my soul, it can only be done through my savior
    Please help me, my heart is lonely, is there somebody for me?
    The answer hazy, murmured, keep living and she’ll be there with unmatched beauty
    So I sit, and wait, with reluctance, soon embalmed with desperation
    On and endless quest, an excursion, navigating across this nation
    What do I see, an entity, with a soul so bright
    I gently ask, with courtesy, everything seems so right

    Apologies to my sistas, how could I doubt your heart?
    Was once told, the world’s cold, it’ll rip you apart
    Stay careful, stay strong, keep your mind fierce
    I’m trying to stay away from the sword, so I don’t get pierced
    Apologies to my sistas, cursed you, called you *******
    The game entrapped me, lashed me, so I stayed suspicious
    I could remember a day when everybody else was boy and girl
    ****, it’s still true, I got friends but I’m lonely in this world

    Mr. 70Live 2001 Edition

    throwbacks"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da cross bow from dis scribe
    tyte drop fo real
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is hot....i like it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel this one. Nice one.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this alot
    nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems we have to go through a lot of thorns before we get to that rose, feelin this drop.
     
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