Black Poetry : Star Sipper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jahvandus, Nov 12, 2001.

  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    Star Sipper
    ____________________________________________________
    Jahvandus Kwu


    I
    don't feel
    like the rain
    but
    floating stones
    shadow into my de'ja' vu
    without
    fear of naming you
    nakedly
    in
    charcoal wind blessings
    surrounded handfuls
    leak
    between my soul
    cocoa feathers
    wanting exposure to
    shape your being
    hollow
    filled with velvet & sandal wood positions
    engraved
    star sipper
    romanced not stirred


    (c) 2001 oBsidiAn Publishings
     
  2. baller

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    might i have a sip...

    of star-dust shaped lust
    with no fuss
    "romanced
    not stirred"
    sans ice
    oh...
    hit me twice


    KEEP PLAYING DEM WORD GAMES, j...kwu.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I gotta agree wit baller on dis one

    ya worked dem keys and played big tyme
    wit dem words .........flow on !:)
     
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    Jah.....

    Very, very nice........
    likin the flow, keep em comin.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jah

    "romanced not stirred"

    I love this peace. It's soothing to the soul





    One
     
  6. alyce

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    You bring "kwu" with such eloquence...

    and what I want to say about the way you speak of romance, exceeds my ability to express myself in the English, or any other language! Your flow is just awesome like that...

    ..Thank you for sharing with us, once again. This is exquisite, my brotha!

    a
     
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    now ya know I had to stop and see this!

    very soothing and very true.

    keep singin in that tone

    lovin the feel of this piece.
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    in memory of ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very very nice...


    ~lovely~
     
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