Black Poetry : Star Sipper

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    I
    don’t feel
    like the rain
    but
    floating stones
    shadow into my déjà vu
    without
    fear of touching you
    nakedly
    in
    charcoal wind blessings
    surrounded handfuls
    leak
    between my soul
    cocoa ashes
    wanting exposure to…
    shape your being
    hollow
    filled with velvet & sandal wood positions
    engraved
    star sipper
    romanced not stirred



    Jahvandus Kwu

    (c) 2001 ObsidianSoul Publishing
    all rights reserved
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so...

    ...abstract, and in depth. *Soakin' up every word of this piece...*
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the pieces of the puzzle...

    fits nicely into the many sided shapes of emotional turmoil turned to bliss with but a kiss.

    lovingly romanced
    and gently stirred.:)

    peace
     
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