Black Poetry : standing outside.. reaching in

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nosrevi, Sep 26, 2003.

  1. Nosrevi

    Nosrevi Member MEMBER

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    I stand at your door
    I see that it’s closed

    I can press my ear to the door
    I can hear your sobs

    The door is locked
    I'm still on the other side

    I can't be there to hold you
    I’m helpless


    You know how I felt
    You know I wanted to stay
    You know that I care for you


    I never wanted to go
    But you decided I was better off
    Without you


    No matter what I said
    No matter what I did
    Nothing I could say
    Could change your mind

    So we stand on opposite ends
    We’re filled with emotions
    I want to rush in and hold you
    Wipe the tears from your face
    Kiss your cheeks lightly
    Rub your hair
    Then kiss your forehead
    Just the way you like me to

    I want to tell you
    That I don’t want to go anywhere
    That no other place
    Feels the same unless you’re there

    Make you believe in the things
    That you don’t anymore
    Make you believe that I could be
    What you need in your life
    I never want to give up on you
    I never want to give up on what could be

    I care about you more than you will ever know
    My feelings run deeper than I ever imagined
    Your smile is like a shining star
    In the night
    Your laugh is like sweet music to my ears
    Your friendship is the best thing
    I ever had

    I wish you could take your hand
    Put it on my heart
    Feel inside
    Feel it beating
    Look in my eyes
    Then you will know
    Trust me baby
    You will know
    I want to stay right here with you

    Copyright ©2003 Nosrevi
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful...i felt the pain and the hurt and the love.
    much love for this piece.
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can honestly say Im going thru sumthin like this. On the outside, reaching in...
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful.....the pain, love and hurt....
    i feel this right here...nice flow
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, I have been at this place. I wish you much peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I love this it was awesomely brautiful
     
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